IELTS Writing

Write under the clock without losing the question.

Task 1, Task 2, timing, relevance, and band-risk control.

§1 · Time rail

Locate the break.

Main break

The ideas are present, but the order makes the answer feel weaker than it is.

First drill

Write a 4-sentence plan before the essay: position, reason one, reason two, concession. Use a three-part spine: point, evidence, next move.

Prompt

Some people think cities should limit private cars. To what extent do you agree?

Rough answer

Nowadays cars are very important and also pollution is a big problem in every country.

Trained answer

I partly agree. Cities should restrict private cars in dense areas, but only when public transport is reliable enough to replace them.

§2 · Paid program

Band-risk map, corrected paragraph, Task 2 planning drill, and timing plan.